Sampling Collecting Collectables

36. INT. MOTEL ROOM. NIGHT

Milton and Wilbur enter the motel room, the room has two single beds, Wilbur collapses onto the bed.

Wilbur

This is so comfy, Milton you should try it

Milton collapses onto the bed.

Wilbur

What you think?

Milton

It’s the nicest place I have rested for the last couple of days.

Milton and Wilbur lay on the beds in silence for a minute, with a faint shower noise for the other room.

Milton

Thin walls mind

Wilbur and Milton lay there in silence again, still with the shower noise faint in the background, a loud scream is heard from the other room, the Pyscho screeching noise is played, Milton jumps.

Milton

What the hell is that?

Wilbur

Don’t worry it was just my phone

Milton lays back down.

Milton

You scared me then Wilbur

Wilbur

Sorry… it was just my mother checking on me

Wilbur is playing with his phone and Milton is laying in silence again with the same shower noise faint in the background. there is a knock on the door.

Milton

Wonder who that is

Wilbur

I don’t know… I will answer it.

Wilbur gets up off the bed and walks towards the door, Wilbur opens the door. The door opening reveals Barry standing in the corridor, Barry is a bit wet and his holding a plastic bag with a little bit of red liquid on the bag.

Wilbur

Hey Barry, you been swimming?

Barry

Hey guys, aw no I just a little problem, it’s taken care of now

Wilbur

That’s good then

Barry

I notice that your clothes looked a bit weary, so I got these for you to

Barry hands Wilbur the plastic bag.

Wilbur

What’s this?

Barry

This is clothes that some guests left here before

Wilbur looks around in the bag.

Wilbur

What if they come back for them?

Barry

Don’t worry they won’t be coming back for them

Wilbur

Ok?

Barry

There are new sets for the both of you

Milton (OS)

Thank you Barry

Wilbur

Yeah thanks Barry

Barry

No worries guys, I have to leave I have to get rid of some rubbish form the motel, so if you see me carrying something to the car that’s quite big, its rubbish, not anything else that is really suspicious…at all 

Wilbur

(Confused)

Ok 

Barry

(Nervous laugh)

it’s not like it’s a body or anything 

Wilbur

Ok well see you tomorrow Barry

Barry

goodnight guys

Barry walks off slowly, Wilbur shuts the door, Wilbur walks towards his bed, Wilbur sits down.

Wilbur

What nice guy Barry is

Milton looks at Wilbur.

Milton

Yeah he seems like 

Wilbur

Well he gave us new clothes, they look good to

Milton

We will sort them in the morning, we should get some sleep it’s been a very long night.

Wilbur

Yeah I guess we should, what’s the plan for tomorrow?

Milton

Don’t worry I will come up with something…night Wilbur

Milton turns onto his side.

Wilbur

Night Milton

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2 comments

  1. crazycultfilms · August 1, 2014

    Cool story! You should make it a short film or trailer or something!

    • ciaranhiscox777 · August 1, 2014

      Thank you! it’s just a scene form a script that I am working on, hopefully one day I will make it into a little something

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